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 {Carta}
-{Sep 2021 -- Dec 2021}
-{Incoming Software Engineering Intern, Infrastructure -- Kitchener, ON}
+{Sep 2021 -- Present}
+{Software Engineering Intern, Infrastructure -- Kitchener, ON}
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 {Software Engineering Intern -- Toronto, ON}
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     \item Improved compatibility with LXC containers by providing in-process TCP/IP and link-layer emulation, using Google gVisor.
-    \item Enabled simple, standard communication for programs over Tailscale network by creating a SOCKS5 proxy server in Go.
-    \item Simplified deployment of application in cloud environments by creating single-session authentication keys with auto-cleanup.
-    \item Secured continuous integration and deployment pipelines by creating GitHub Action to allow workflows to use VPN client.
-    \item Expanded outreach with technical community by writing long-form content for knowledge base and corporate blog (\underline{\href{https://tailscale.com/blog/2021-05-github-actions-and-tailscale/}{link}}).
+    \item Enabled standardized communication using SOCKS5 protocol over Tailscale VPN by implementing proxy server in Go.
+    \item Simplified deployments in cloud environments by creating single-session authentication keys with auto-cleanup.
+    \item Enabled clients to secure CI/CD pipelines by creating a GitHub Action (\underline{\href{https://github.com/tailscale/github-action}{link}}) that allows workflows to use Tailscale VPN. % can say CI/CD here
+    \item Expanded outreach within technical community by writing long-form content for knowledge base and corporate blog (\underline{\href{https://tailscale.com/blog/2021-05-github-actions-and-tailscale/}{link}}).
     \end{itemize}}
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 {Research Associate, Sirius Blockchain Research Group -- Waterloo, ON}
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     \item Hardened security by enforcing BLS signature verification for Byzantine fault tolerant distributed consensus system in Go.
-    \item Streamlined deployment of project, by using Docker images to generate repeatable builds across diverse environments.
+    \item Streamlined deployment of project by using Docker images to generate repeatable builds across diverse environments.
     \item Unified similar codebases by migrating duplicate components to a single  C++ project.
     \item Assisted distributed systems research by conducting experiments on AWS EC2 and analyzing performance data in gnuplot.
     \end{itemize}}
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 {May 2019 -- Aug 2019}
 {Software Engineering Intern -- New Delhi, India}
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-    \item Simplified professional photography, by building native apps to deliver photos to clients, using Electron and React Native.
-    \item Designed and deployed API to upload and preview photos in low-bandwidth situations, using Node.js and AWS S3.
-    \item Reduced technical debt in React Native project by combining similar functionality into reusable components.
+    \item Simplified distribution of professionally clicked photos by building Electron and React Native apps.
+    \item Designed and deployed API to upload and preview photos in low-bandwidth situations using Node.js and AWS S3.
+    \item Reduced technical debt in React Native project by replacing duplicated code with reusable components.
     \end{itemize}}
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